Chapter 7 5. Muscle

one When the students saw Mr. Yang walk into the classroom, they shouted unanimously: Teacher, tell a story! Teacher Yang said: We can no longer tell stories. We told too many stories last time.Take an essay as an example, a story is like MSG in cooking, a little less can enhance the taste, but never more; a story is like a cosmetic, it can make a paper more beautiful; Misuse of cosmetics. The students still didn't give up and still clamored to hear the story. Teacher Yang said: OK, OK, let's make a compromise.We want to mention a novel, that is the famous Dream of Red Mansions. Most of the students have read A Dream of Red Mansions and know that it is a romance novel. Now that they hear that this book will be included in the classroom, they all have smiles on their faces.

Teacher Yang said: A few days ago, I saw your homework, and a classmate wrote a sentence in the homework book: A Dream of Red Mansions is a bad book.This sentence is a judgment and a criticism of Dream of Red Mansions. His attitude is exactly the attitude of writing a thesis.I once asked this classmate, what is the reason to conclude that Dream of the Red Chamber is bad?He said that was what the pastor of the church told him.Yes, if you go to the church and ask the pastor, almost nine out of ten pastors say that Dream of the Red Chamber is a bad book, and they object to believers reading this book; in schools, there are also many teachers who forbid students to read this book.Their opinion is:

We shouldn't read bad books. A Dream of Red Mansions is a bad book, So we shouldn't watch Dream of the Red Chamber. These three sentences can be regarded as the skeleton of a thesis, and muscles must be attached to the skeleton.What are these muscles?You have seen these things already.Some students, who progress faster, already arrange these things in their papers.You have all read Mr. Hu Shi’s Theory of Immortality. He said: A person who plays the sanxian leaves an indelible impact; a person with lung disease also leaves an indelible impact.These two sentences are like two bones. Mr. Hu wrote hundreds of words in order to explain how the person who played the three-stringed strings changed and influenced others.How did the person with lung disease influence others? The article also used one or two hundred words.You see, a sentence becomes hundreds of words, and hundreds of words are still inseparable from that sentence. This is the bone supporting the muscle, and the muscle attaching to the bone.Wu Qiang, a classmate in the class, wrote an article to the effect that even if a person has some kind of physical defect, he can still achieve great achievements.In this article, he arranged a skeleton.He said that Roosevelt had physical defects, but Roosevelt had great achievements; Development is just changing the direction of development.This skeleton can only be said in five or six sentences, but Wu Qiang also wrote hundreds of words, which also shows the relationship between bones and muscles.What exactly are muscles?Let me express it in one sentence. The so-called muscle is the sentence that uses you as a bone. Explain it clearly and make it clear.Now let’s go back to Dream of Red Mansions. Dream of Red Mansions is a bad book. What is the reason?What is its guilt?I have to make it clear that this kind of explanation is the muscle of the thesis.We shouldn't read bad books, why shouldn't we read bad books?What harm do bad books do to us?It should be explained clearly, and this explanation is also the muscle of the thesis.Let's first study why Dream of the Red Chamber is a bad book?This first asks what is the plot of Dream of Red Mansions.Liu Baocheng, tell me the plot of Dream of Red Mansions!

Liu Baocheng stood up bravely and said: Once upon a time, there was a stone under a barren mountain. This stone could be big or small, and it could be reincarnated as a human being.Later, he became a son-in-law.Later, that young master brought this stone with him every day.later Teacher Yang interrupted him with gestures and asked: How long do you plan to spend explaining the plot of Dream of the Red Chamber?Liu Baocheng said: I don't know.When Liu Baocheng stood up to tell the story, the audience was silent, and the small eyes were wide open. Everyone paid attention to what he said.Later, when I heard Liu Baocheng say that I don't know, the audience felt a sudden relief amidst the tension, and burst out laughing; Teacher Yang also laughed.Teacher Yang said: You should know how much time you can use to explain the plot of A Dream of Red Mansions, because you should know how many words there are in one of your papers.If the article is 500 words, it means that the disadvantages of Dream of Red Mansions should not exceed 300 words.If the article is 1,000 words, it means that the disadvantages of Dream of Red Mansions should not exceed 500 words.You can make an arm or a leg grow too thick.I think Liu Baocheng is a loyal reader of The Dream of Red Mansions. (Students laughed, even Liu Baocheng laughed.) However, if he continues to talk like this, it will not be able to finish in a short time. We don’t need to talk about anything else this semester.According to this situation, to write this article, first go to the bookstore to buy a copy of A Dream of Red Mansions, and then stick a note under the book, which reads: We should not read this bad book, and then we can hand in the paper .Is there such a way?

The student responded with a smile. Teacher Yang continued: Liu Baocheng, you may have been embarrassed just now.I hope you can remember from this that you should have the ability to find out the gist of a complicated matter and explain it in simple words.You must have this ability, if not, develop this ability from now on. Teacher Yang repeated it forcefully to the whole class: You should all have this ability, and if anyone does not have this ability, you should start cultivating it from now on.This is an inductive ability.As far as I know, the main plot of Dream of Red Mansions is the love affair of three people, all three of whom are very young, maybe fourteen, five, or fifteen or six years old.In general, this age is not the age to fall in love. They are too young, too immature, and too ignorant of life; their love is wrong, immature, and potentially dangerous.Among these three people, there is at least one person who has great responsibilities and high expectations from his family, but he hates other people's expectations of him. He is intoxicated in love every day, and when love fails, he escapes. The family went to become monks.Such a love story, the great novelist wrote him very movingly; those love scenes are exciting, intoxicating, sacred and inviolable, as if doing anything else is wrong except being in love. outside.For this reason, some people say that Dream of the Red Chamber is a bad book, and only priests forbid congregants to read it, and only teachers forbid students to read it.

After a pause, Teacher Yang said: We started to discuss that we should not read bad books, and I hope you all can express your opinions. Think about it, what will happen if you read a bad book? The student said: We are all going to learn badly. How can you learn bad things? We were influenced by that book. By the way, a book must have an impact on readers more or less.There are some bad things in society that you don't know about at first, but you know all about them after reading bad books.There are some thoughts that make you shy and frightened. You didn’t think about them in a hazy way, but after reading the bad book, you think about them all, and you will think about them often.At least at your age the mind should be guarded; and there are many things which you cannot know before you have developed a sense of judgment.This meaning, if you stand on your standpoint and replace the word you with my word, it can explain why we should not read bad books.Think about it, should you read bad books?

Should not! Should I watch Dream of the Red Chamber? Should not! Why shouldn't you watch A Dream of Red Mansions? Because A Dream of Red Mansions is a bad book. By the way, written like this, it is an article with flesh and blood.Where does the flesh come from?Remember what I just said: explain your reasons clearly and describe the evidence you give.You say Dream of the Red Chamber is a bad book, write it out!Its disadvantages are there.You said that Milton switched to poetry after he became blind, write it!Why was he blind, what works did he write, and whether his works were good.You said that early risers can see a good view, write it!What are these landscapes.You say early risers get some fresh air, write it!When fresh air enters the human body, what effect does it have on human physiology?You say there are too many disorderly people and there is chaos at the station, so show us the chaos.You said that if students don't study hard, they will make their parents sad, so tell us how sad they are.You said that you must return the things you borrowed from others. If you don’t want to return them, others won’t be your friends anymore, and no one will lend you anything in the future. You will develop bad habits and have no sense of responsibility.You said, when speaking in public places, the voice should not be too loud. Talking loudly will definitely annoy others, make yourself appear childish, and sometimes reveal the secrets of you and your friends.These are the muscles of essay writing.After reading the above examples, you can find that the muscle of the thesis is sometimes an explanation, and sometimes a narrative. Of course, it can also be a kind of discussion.

The way to grow muscle is a long story.There was a couple fighting, and a third party hurried to persuade them. Afterwards, I asked the person who went to persuade them, what was the reason for the fight?He said he thought it was her husband's fault.Where is the husband's fault?It was a long story, he took out a cigarette, lit it, and said slowly: My husband likes to dance, he doesn't come home for dinner often, he doesn't give his wife his salary after receiving it, and so on.This couple fought, and it was the husband's fault. This is a judgment sentence, an illegal sentence, and it can also be said to be a bone.It's a long story, and he will tell her husband's various crimes next, which are not all sentences of judgment.There are explanations, narratives, or descriptions in that passage, which are muscles.The principal gets up early, so he is in good health. This is a bone. What time does the principal get up?Had the streetlights gone out when he got up?He always goes to the mountains to practice Taijiquan. What good is there in going to the mountains?Does he have companions?Is his companion as persevering as he is?It's all a long story, and it's all muscle.

Having said that, the class bell rang.Teacher Yang asked: Should we dismiss the class?The students all said that class should be dismissed.Teacher Yang asked: What about its muscles?Some students say that the teacher cannot rest if the class is not over, some students say that the students cannot go to the toilet if the class is not over, and some students say that other teachers cannot attend the class if the class is not over.The discussion here is undecided, and Teacher Yang has already picked up the chalk box and walked away there. two Opposite this middle school, there is a national school.The relationship between the two schools has always been close.Many of the students in the middle school were promoted from the primary school, and there are many students in the primary school who also hope to be promoted to the middle school opposite in the future.Between middle school students and primary school students, some are brothers and sisters, some are relatives and friends, and everyone often plays together.When an accident happens in this school, if it spreads to that school, it is a sensational news.

There are two students in the national school, one is Cheng Hui and the other is Hu Yuzhi.One day when school was over, the two left school and went home together.They walked side by side on the road.At about the same time, they saw a banknote on the road, and at about the same time, they bent down to pick it up.Cheng Hui first picked up the bill in his hand. It was a ten-yuan bill. The paper was very dirty and old, but it was still intact.Hu Yuzhi said: Hurry up and send this banknote to the police station, the police will find the person who lost the money.Cheng Hui ignored this, stuffed the money into his pocket, and ran away.Hu Yuzhi followed closely behind, shouting while chasing, "The money is not yours!"In this way, he chased him all the way to Cheng Hui's house.Cheng Hui's mother is playing cards.Cheng Hui went to the poker table and looked for a place to hide beside his mother. Hu Yuzhi chased after him, and the two circled around the poker table.While playing cards, Mrs. Cheng asked, "Yuzhi, what are you going to do with this child?"Hu Yuzhi said: We found ten yuan on the road, but Cheng Hui refused to send it to the police station.Mrs. Cheng said, "You idiot, why are you sending him to the police station?"Let's share five yuan each!As he spoke, without looking up, he picked up five yuan from the card table, stuffed it into Hu Yuzhi's schoolbag, waved his hand and said, "Go ahead, go buy candy."The servant girl ran over from there, coaxed and pushed Hu Yuzhi out of the door.

Hu Yuzhi sent the five yuan to the police station.He told the police officer on duty that he had found ten yuan, but he got half of it, so he could only send five yuan.A journalist was looking for news in the police station. He thought this trivial incident was very interesting, so he wrote a piece of news and sent it to the newspaper office.The editor of the newspaper also thought this little incident was very interesting, and published it in a very noticeable place.The next day, these two children immediately became the characters everyone talked about.The reporter of the radio station felt that this news deserved a wider coverage, so he broadcast a special program for fifteen minutes.The radio reporter interviewed Hu Yuzhi first, and let the audience hear from him how he collected and distributed the money, and heard that he sent five yuan to the police station.The broadcast reporter then asked: Why are you doing this?Who told you that you should turn over the money you found to the police?Hu Yuzhi said: It is our mentor, Mr. Liu.The radio reporter said to his audience: This teacher Liu is really amazing. His education is completely successful. He must be a very good and responsible teacher. He teaches his students with enthusiasm, love, and patience. There will be such results.Every listener must be very willing to listen to this teacher Liu talk.I've got him, and he's right next to me.Speaking of this, the broadcast reporter changed his tone and asked the guests beside him: Teacher Liu, what method do you use to teach your students so well?A gentle female voice replied: Mr. Reporter, you are too generous, let me tell you the truth.The child Hu Yuzhi was a good child before I taught him. His good behavior was caused by family education. His parents were upright and kind, and they set an example for the child.The reporter said: Ms. Liu, you think family education is more powerful than school education in cultivating children's good conduct, don't you?The other party replied: Yes, I believe Dewey's words: education is life. People in the middle school were talking enthusiastically about what happened in the elementary school, and the students asked Teacher Yang what he thought.Teacher Yang said: I don't express my opinion, I want you to express your opinion first.Do you think Hu Yuzhi did the right thing?The students all thought it was the right thing to do.Do you think that in order for children to behave well, parents should first set an example?The answer is: it is best for parents to be role models.Well, Teacher Yang said: Wu Qiang, write down everyone's opinions into a skeleton. Wu Qiang picked up the pen and swiped it. What was written on it was: It is a good thing to pick up money.Hu Yuzhi did a good deed by picking up money without hesitation. The behavior of parents has a significant impact on their children.Parents have improper behavior, and children can easily learn improper behavior. Teacher Yang handed the paper to Gong Mei and said: You let him grow muscles.Gong Mei wrote: Suppose you were walking on the road and saw a roll of banknotes on the ground, which was obviously lost by someone else, what would you do?Turn around and walk away?Take it home and spend it?Find a way to make it possible for people who lost money to find it?There is only one correct answer here, and that is: it is not ignorant to pick up money.You try to preserve the money and give the person who lost it a way to get it back.In this way, people are happy, and you are also happy.This is certainly a good thing. In the national school opposite, there was a student named Hu Yuzhi. When school was over, he and another student picked up ten yuan.Hu Yuzhi advocated handing over the money to the police and letting the police handle it; but another student firmly opposed it, and even the student's parents objected to their doing so.Because of disagreements, they split the money, five dollars each.The naive little sister Hu handed over the five yuan she got to the police. He heard from his mentor that the police might find those who lost the money. This is the best way to pick up money.It is a good thing to pick up money, and Hu Yuzhi has done a good thing.Newspapers and radio stations praised him greatly. Hu Yuzhi was able to do this, why couldn't the other student?From the news reports, we can know that Hu Yuzhi's parents are kind and upright people, and their behavior first set an example for their children; while the other student, whose mother played cards by herself, put forward a proposition that the children If they share the money they picked up equally to buy sweets, one can imagine his education for the children.The behavior of parents has a significant impact on children. If parents behave well, children will learn to be good easily. If parents behave badly, children will easily learn to be bad. Because when children are not sensible, they will naturally imitate adults, their thoughts and practices. It is easy to penetrate the minds of children.From this point of view, how important family education is! Teacher Yang gave this article to Lu Zhunian again, and asked him to think of a short story to use in this article.It just so happened that this morning, Lu Zhunian read a newspaper and saw a small filler article, which could be used.That little story is: The teachers in the kindergarten held a meeting with the parents of the students, and everyone discussed and solved some problems in disciplining the children.There was a child named John who used to take home pencils from the kindergarten after school. His teacher tried everything he could to correct his behavior.At the meeting, John's father was asked for his opinion.The parent stood up and said: That's weird, I don't know what's going on.I have a lot of pencils in my office, and I often bring some home with me when I get off work. There is no shortage of pencils in the house. Why does Little John come home with pencils? Teacher Yang said, this story is good, please compile it into your thesis.Take a look, where is the best place to put it?