Chapter 4 Two, it is illegal

one Teacher Yang has received Wu Qiang's article, which is written like this: world!I hate you!In this world, there are too many clowns, too much irrationality, too much noise! Maybe it's God's will?I am not as fluent in speech as others.Although my father invited a specialized doctor to correct me, it didn't work.My father said to me: This is a very small shortcoming, it doesn't matter, don't think about it often!Yes, I'm as nimble as anybody when it comes to doing math, and I'm as quick as anybody when it comes to playing ball.In the classroom, on the court, I am no weaker than anyone.I just can't enter the speech contest.However, some people want to mock me in class because they refuse to pass the ball to me on the court.I'd like to forget my faults, but they won't.

I always feel very lonely in the noisy place.I can't relate to others.Even Robinson Robinson on the barren hill is just as lonely as me!No, Robinson can stay away from the crowd, but I can't, I am with many people, and when they see me, they immediately feel a sense of superiority.I'm really baffled: they also have shortcomings, why should they be so proud? I want to study hard, stand out, and show them. Teacher Yang admitted that Wu Qiang's article was well written, but he always felt something was wrong after reading it.Where is the error?Teacher Yang found out!When he taught Wu Qiang to write this article, he hoped that Wu Qiang would write it into an essay.In his mind, essays have the tone and style of essays.In this article by Wu Qiang, the way of making sentences is not like a thesis.But what method do you use to make a sentence in a thesis?

Teacher Yang pondered.Not cherishing the time is a waste of life, this is a thesis; the time is passing like water, who can keep you?Not a thesis.Maternal love will never be forgotten, dear mother!I am forever grateful to you!Not like a thesis.Disgusting is a dissertation, what a distaste!It's not like a thesis.The way the thesis is written is to wake up the elderly yesterday and make the young look forward to tomorrow.The way to write lyrical essays is: let go go, let go come.The sun, it has feet!Moved gently and prettyly!How to tell students the difference between the two? He remembered that it is a common problem among students to use lyrical tones when writing thesis topics. Two-thirds of boys have this habit, and almost all girls have this habit.For example, a student named Gong Mei wrote an essay on entering higher education

The scene of the school entrance examination two years ago was like a movie scene shaking before my eyes.On the eve of the exam, I stayed up all night, so my mother stayed with me all night.I was so nervous that I didn't know which book to read. I sat on the chair in a daze until the rooster crowed and the bright red sun appeared in the east. Then I stepped into the examination room accompanied by my father, mother, brother and sister.However, on the day when the list was released, I couldn't find my name on the bulletin board.The people who came to see the list walked away with smiles on their faces, but I stood there numbly.I didn't leave there until the workers came to close the door, and wandered aimlessly on the street.Famous Sun Shan!What else is there to go back to see your family?Now, I am about to take another entrance exam. If I pass, my future is happy and bright. What if I fail?I can't even think about it.I have to work harder, do my homework until twelve o'clock every night, and have to get up at five o'clock in the morning. If this continues, I'm afraid I won't be able to go to school, and I will only have a handful of bones left.

You see, this article focuses on writing my feelings rather than writing my own opinions.An essay is a reasoning, an expression of opinion.In this way, can the students understand it? If they can't understand it, what kind of statement should it be?After thinking about it, the class bell rang, and Teacher Yang had no choice but to put down this unsolved problem and go to the classroom. two After class, someone saw Mr. Yang in a daze in the office. What is Mr. Yang thinking? Before class, he had thought that the sentences of a thesis were different from the sentences of a lyric.He couldn't understand for a while, what kind of sentence is the sentence of the thesis.Just now, when he was giving a lecture in class, he recited the sentences in the text over and over again, and suddenly realized something in his mind. After class, he caught and fixed the thought in his mind, making it clear and clear.He remembered the yes-false questions in the test.I still remember that when he first took over as a coach, it was his turn to ask questions for the first time, including the right and wrong question.Sentences in composition seem to be divided into two categories, one is sentences with right and wrong questions, and the other is sentences without right and wrong questions.The sentence of the thesis is exactly the kind of sentence that contains questions of right and wrong. This kind of sentence is expressing a judgment, which contains true or false, right or wrong, approval or opposition.In recent years, although it has not been widely used to illegally test the level of students, illegal test questions are still familiar to students.If you tell students that the sentences in the thesis are very similar to illegal topics, students will definitely be able to draw inferences by analogy.

Yes, just do it. Mr. Yang collected the following sentences by hand: 1. Sentences that conform to are illegal: China is an ancient country. Man is the spirit of all things. Hydrogen dioxygen-synthetic water. Rome wasn't built in a day. 2. Sentences without true or false questions: Teach me how not to miss him. Ren'er is accompanied by a lonely lamp, and Bang'er is beating the third watch. The bird wants it to be a cloud, the cloud wants it to be a bird. When the lights came on, pedestrians flocked to the place. God! 3. Do the following sentences contain true and false questions?Note + for those that contain true or false questions, and note for those that do not contain true or false questions?Number.

Time is accumulated every minute and every second. ( ) All things are mortal. ( ) The warm wind makes tourists drunk. ( ) The Pinghu Lake, which is also like a mirror, reflects the sunset like rouge. ( ) The door opened. ( ) Are things difficult or easy in the world?For this, what is difficult is also easy. ( ) The swallow has gone, and there will be time to come again. ( ) I looked at the bright moon in a daze. ( ) The river is long, and people's heads are white. ( ) 4. Rewrite the following sentences without right and wrong questions into right and wrong sentences: (1) I don't know how many days they gave me, but my hands gradually became empty.

(2) God! (3) Many people don't like to eat water spinach. (4) He passed the entrance examination this year. (5) I have seen the distant, near and silhouette views of Kawabata Bridge. He printed these sentences on paper and distributed them to the students.He first helped the students identify (1) (2) two sets of sentences, and then taught the students to practice (3) (4) sets of sentences.The students were very interested, and some were so interested that they even rewrote the second set of sentences.Of course, not all of them were correct, but quite a few were correct.Teacher Yang compiled the grades rewritten by everyone and printed a handout:

(1) Teach me how not to miss him. 1. People can never forget the one they love. 2. A man must not forget his benefactor. 3. If you receive benefits from others, you must try to repay them. Fourth, be careful not to forget when receiving gifts. 5. There is a mysterious attraction between the opposite sex. (2) Ren'er is accompanied by a lonely lamp, and Bang'er is beating the third watch. 1. When people are more quiet, it is suitable to think alone. Second, insomnia is a painful thing. 3. People who are broken in love are lonely in their hearts. Fourth, the elderly need someone to accompany them.

(3) The bird wants it to be a cloud, and the cloud wants it to be a bird. 1. Everyone is dissatisfied with reality. Second, fantasies cannot be realized. 3. People who are not determined will change their minds. Fourth, fantasy can not be limited by facts. 5. Desires are endless. 6. Everyone thinks that other people's things are better than their own. (4) When the lights are on, pedestrians flock to the place. 1. People like to go to lively places. 2. The city at dusk is bustling. 3. There are many people in lively places. Fourth, everyone tends to be obsessed with prosperity. (5) OMG!

1. Only fools call heaven. Second, the gods have incomparable might. 3. Heaven is just. 4. People who are poor call heaven. (6) THE DOOR IS OPEN! 1. Open doors and windows to allow air circulation. Second, if you are not careful about the door, it is easy to recruit thieves. (7) I look at the bright moon in a trance. 1. Moonlight can stir up people's thoughts. 2. When people are under the moonlight, their emotions are particularly rich. (8) I don't know how many days they have given me, but my hands are getting more and more empty. 1. No one can predict how long the life span will be, only that the time is getting shorter and shorter. Second, the elderly especially cherish their time. 3. Those who have lost their time know that time is precious. 4. The wheel of time is relentless. 5. The more ruthless time is, the more precious life is. (9) Many people don't like to eat water spinach. 1. If a person does not have real talent and learning, he will not be welcomed by the society. 2. Rich people refuse to eat cheap food. 3. Water spinach has no nutritional value. 4. If you eat water spinach every day, you will never eat water spinach one day. (10) He passed the entrance examination this year. 1. Hardworking students make progress. 2. Where there is sowing, there will be harvest. 3. If you have good grades, you can be admitted to a good school. (11) I have seen all the distant, near and silhouette views of Kawabata Bridge. 1. Kawabata Bridge is the most beautiful bridge in Taipei. Second, the length of the Kawabata Bridge is not as good as that of the Xiluo Bridge. three When returning homework, Teacher Yang asked: Liu Baocheng, what did you do last night? I'm going to see a movie. Is that movie good? not good. How do you see it? Liu Baocheng couldn't answer for a moment.Teacher Yang turned his eyes to the other corner: Zhao Hua, what were you doing at home last night? Do your laundry at home. What kind of soap do you use? I use soap powder. Why use soap powder?Is there a reason? Zhao Hua bowed his head and did not answer.Teacher Yang changed another object: Kim Sun-bo!You hear, there are two of them, one is going to the movies, and the other is doing laundry at home.Do you have any opinion?Is it better to do laundry at home at night, or go out and watch a movie? Before Jin Shanbao could reply, the students all laughed.Teacher Yang said: Don't laugh, I'm teaching you how to write a thesis. A thesis is to give reasons, to make judgments, and to express opinions.One day, a team from outside came to play on our field, and you all gathered around to watch.I hear you watching and criticizing, saying that this player played well, that player did not play well, that this player intentionally bumped into someone, it was too immoral, that player was tall, why didn’t he control the ball at the basket, and so on.Your chirping voices are all about reasoning, making judgments, and dissertations.One day, you were watching a drama in the auditorium, and the venue was in a bad order, because many people were watching the drama and talking at the same time.What are they talking about?They're saying that a certain character is really bad!A character is wearing clothes that don't fit!An actor's Mandarin pronunciation is not accurate at all!These audiences have to express their opinions, so order is not easy to maintain. In other words, the reason why the audience is not quiet is because there are too many papers in the audience. You, those who want to write a good paper, must develop the ability to make judgments and give reasons.Judgments are not made casually, but reasons are required.Where does the reason come from?Come from experience and knowledge.Narrative essays record facts, lyrical essays exclamate because of facts, and argumentative essays draw reasons and opinions from facts.Yesterday, I was in a teahouse and saw two middle school students smoking. They were smoking Double Happiness cigarettes, and their fingers were yellowed. This is a narrative.How can you smoke at such a young age!Young people, do your parents know you are here?What are you going to do when you finish smoking?What a worry!It's lyrical.Teenagers should not smoke.There should be a law against young people smoking.Middle school students smoke, which is a failure of school education.That's it for the thesis. Writing a thesis is a judgment call.A tone of judgment is an illegal tone.Remember these first! Four Encouraged by Teacher Yang, when students were writing their weekly journals, they all wrote illegal sentences in the column of thoughts!Their opinions may not be correct, but the sentence patterns are all correct: The social atmosphere caused the Taibao Taimei.Families and schools are also responsible. A Dream of Red Mansions is a bad book. Corporal punishment should be completely abolished in schools. It is not as good as separate classes for men and women. Chinese recitation competitions are meaningless. To be successful, one must use both hands and brains. Li Zhengdao and Yang Zhenning are geniuses. Morality is the standard of all behavior, and everything that is moral is right. Steel and concrete buildings are both beautiful and strong. Diligence is a virtue, but it should not be overcorrected and become stingy. Learning is important, but being a person is more important than learning. The charity sale of the Red Cross should be done by college students, and they don't need to prepare for further studies. Some students, looking for illegal sentences from other people's articles, copied them down: The mouth of the altar is easy to seal, but the population is difficult to seal.proverb. His family was ruined, and words accounted for eight points.proverb. Faithful words are good for deeds, and good medicine is good for sickness.proverb. There are no flukes, and the most fortuitous accidents are bound to happen.Schiller. Feelings reminisced in tranquility are poetry.wordsworth. I only know one thing, and that's that I don't know anything.Socrates. Love is blind, lovers can't see the stupid things they do.Shakespeare. The way to get a friend is to be that person's friend yourself first.Emerson. Writing is words, difficult to work but gratifying, easy to please and self-sufficient.Ouyang Xiu. Wine clubs and Liyuan clubs have lost money and lost customs.Chen Hongxu. Look at the village, and know the easy way of kingship.Book of Rites. Wu Qiang and Gong Mei also used illegal sentences to rewrite their thoughts: In this world, the most lack of warmth and compassion. Physically handicapped people are bullied everywhere. A weak person must work hard to make progress and stand out. Stuttering is a minor defect that does not hinder future prospects. Everyone has shortcomings, but it doesn't have to be a stuttering.Above Wu Qiang. The entrance examination is a fierce battle. Excessive tension makes people tired, thin, and memory loss. Those who are eliminated in the competition for higher education are looked down upon by relatives and friends. Although the taste of success is sweet, the taste of failure is extremely uncomfortable. Only the mother is the most tolerant, she will always forgive you.Above Gong Mei.